What can you write instead of “she smiled”? I feel like it’s too straight out to write every time. How do I show and not tell?

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“Of course!” Her smile flashed.

The quick glint of her teeth told me she was amused.

Her eyes danced (or twinkled)

“She chuckled,” or “she laughed” also work. Try doing either without a smile. (But do not use either to replace “she said” as attribution. You really can’t speak and laugh at the same instant.)

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